Learning to write a sonnet

The Greater Lehigh Valley Writer’s Group has opened to members an invitation to submit short stories, essays and poems for possible inclusion in the  2027 Anthology  with a theme of “Writing from the heart.”

I have been fortunate to have three stories of mine selected for the last three anthologies, so I’m trying again this year.

For those interested in the other anthologies,  Google “Greater Lehigh Valley Writers Group,” or search Amazon.

In have two stories in mind, but I like this one that includes a test of writing skill.

I’ll finish the other one, too, having a back-up is a good plan.

So, this is the story: A 16-year-old Nathan, moved by a story written by his hope-to-be girlfriend, Carolyn Jackson, or Jaxx, wants to tell her his feeling in a sonnet. He has never written a sonnet.

Their teacher opens a contest: One month to write a perfect Shakesperean sonnet.

The story in part–there are other complications–is about Nanthan and Jaxx telling each other how much they care through their sonnets.

Part of the action of the story is Nathan learning to write a sonnet, an adventure I will be sharing, since I have never written one, and certainly no poetry as structured as a Shakespearean sonnet.

So, I’m practicing.

I have nine months before the deadline, so I’m gonna write a bunch of sonnets to see if I can  right.

Current image: flock of birds perched on bare tree in winter

Here’s the first:

No soft bird songs cracked the sky, forgiving and cold;

Clouds clustered, rumbled, piled to block the sun.

Sparrows twitter no more as cocky crows scold

As grumbling from war machines has begun.

Hide away weak things, soldiers need resolve;

The hot air must be forced open and hollowed

To accept  the screams the metal curtain dissolves

from the throats of those whose lives were borrowed.

But this is false: That there is no path for lovers;

Whispers drift unseen only to the ears intended

Like a kiss finger-thrown in a room of others.

May it gentle float to a spot best landed.

It’s not just eyes, this thing, not just fingers,

But a voice, a sighing hum that lingers.

About michaelstephendaigle

I am the author of the award-winning Frank Nagler Mystery series. "The Swamps of Jersey (2014); "A Game Called Dead" (2016) -- a Runner-Up in the 2016 Shelf Unbound Indie Author Contest; "The Weight of Living" (2017) -- “The Weight of Living” was awarded First Place for mysteries in the 2017 Royal Dragonfly Book Award contest; Named A Notable 100 Book, Shelf Unbound 2018 Indie Book Awards; Named a Distinguished Favorite, 2018 Independent Press Awards. Named a Distinguished Favorite in the 2018 Big NYC Book Contest. Named a Finalist in the 2019 Book Excellence Awards. Named A Gold Star Award winner in the 2020 Elite Choice Book Awards Named a Book Award Winner in 2021 by Maincraft Media Fiction Book Awards; The Red Hand (2019) a Distinguished Favorite in the 2019 Big NYC Book Contest Named Second Place winner for mysteries in the 2019 Royal Dragonfly Book Awards Named a Notable 100 Book in the 2019 Shelf Unbound Indie Book Awards Named a Distinguished Favorite in the 2020 Independent Press Awards A Nominee in the 2020 TopShelf Book Awards Named A Gold Star Award winner in the 2020 Elite Choice Book Awards Dragony Rising (2022) First Place for Mysteries in the 2022 Royal Dragonyfly Book Awards; named a Notable 100 Indie Book in the 2022 Shelf Unbound Indie Book Awards; A Distinguished Favorite in the 2023 Independent Press Awards. A Distinguished Favorite in the 2023 Big NYC Book Awards.
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