Nagler Mysteries: Setting as character

In their review of the fifth Frank Nagler Mystery, the award-winning DRAGONY RISING, Kirkus Reviews said, “The decaying Ironton is as rich a character as Frank.”

In the series, Ironton, N,J. Detective Frank Nagler’s hometown. His story and that of the city are forever intertwined.

This scene shows how it works:

“The empty, dark house weighted, wisps of Lauren’s presence hanging. Jeans clinging to a chair arm, a wadded towel still moist with her rose-scented body wash, hints of lavender shampoo, piles of musty, water-stained tan paper files, pages of reports open and underlined, a cup half filled with white skimmed coffee; in the kitchen sink a vase holding the flowers he brought her, the purple buds now brown, the sagging sunflowers. “Don’t worry,” she says. “I’ve got this.”

 And I have to believe that she does. He leaned backside against the sink and surveyed the room: haphazard paper piles, the empty beer bottles on the table, her coat slung across the counter, a plastic bag left from Chinese takeout, three forgotten fortune cookies and a menu nestled in the bottom.

Streetlights in a park on a foggy night in autumn. Shallow D.O.F., long exposure.

This is us, Frank Nagler thought, the trail of us, the perfect imperfection, the chaos of two lives running in nine directions, pressed by all these things dark and light closing in, unable to even fill a flower vase with water to keep them alive, yet knowing just the same how delicately their scent drifted in to the dry air, how the frail petals slipped against her fingers, how she smiled, one moment in this unspoken, tangled thing.

 He turned and stared into the darkness beyond the window, his face a wavy outline, a smear of light.

 The moment is rising, he thought. We have no choice, but to stand.

Pushed from the house to escape its answerless questions, Nagler walked.

 The day’s mist, now cleared and frozen, drips made temporary stalactites frozen on the tips of dark branches, sidewalks sheen slick, streets still, shining as a glitter of light trapped in ice. Lights fuzzy with icy patina.

He had walked this route a hundred times, back through the years of his life, down streets that grew darker where the streetlights failed, along narrowing broken sidewalks to the darkened dirt paths, places memories deepened. Past three-story, white homes with wide porches and picket fences, past the pretty parks to warrens of broken trees, weeds curled like snakes around stunted trunks; then descending along alleys lined with single story unpainted dull wooden garages and sheds with uneven doors and cardboard windows, dying grass at the corners.

 Finally to the bottom, the center: The empty lot where his grandparents had lived. The old man would sway in his chair, hands bent and gnarled gripped the rails, feet locked to the floor, eyes pinned to the past, a face like iron. “They meant well,” he told his grandson from that chair one day before he died. “But they had no idea what they were doing. No means to govern other men. So they stopped trying. Governed for themselves. Greed gets easy. The cheap houses they built, the company stores, wages gleaned, and when the troubles started, hired the thugs to maintain order, the friendlies, the sons, the cousins, brothers, nephews. Hired their own kind, all else be damned.”

Nagler remembered the old man leaned forward, elbows on the chair rails and growled, “It will go on till someone stops it, Frankie, someone from these dreary streets, someone who knows …” His grandfather had collapsed back into the chair, weary.

“Knows what, Grandpa?” Frank asked.

 “Our life, Frank boy. Knows our life.”

When Nagler told Martha that story years later, as teens sitting on the front porch of her parents’ comfortable home under the soft light of a summer day, she turned his face to hers and said, “That wasn’t a curse, Frank,” before she kissed him.

“Feels like one,” he had replied.

“No, no, no, Frankie.” She wrapped her arms around his neck. “It was his blessing.”

DRAGONY RISING was awarded First place for Mysteries in the 2022 Royal Dragonfly Indie Book Awards. And named a NOTABLE 100  Indie Book in the 2022 Shelf Unbound book awards.

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Frank Nagler — Ten years later. Wow.

Ten years ago, they said yes.

They being Imzadi Publishing of Tulsa, Oklahoma.

Specifically, publisher Janice Grove and graphic artist and designer Anita Dugan-Moore, who with editor Kay Springfield, have helped bring Detective Frank Nagler to life.

Yeah, ten years.

That’s when the first Frank Nagler Mystery, THE SWAMPS OF JERSEY arrived as a book.

So thanks to the Imzadi guys.

And to readers Lee Alan and Dane Petersen who brought the books to life in audio versions.

And to all who have read and commented on the stories.

This thing has been more than just writing stories, but a tale of modern American publishing and of a company taking a chance on an absolutely unknown fiction writer.

I answered an ad seen on an online magazine, and a week later I had a publisher.

This after a couple years of  sending rejected queries to publishers  and agents  — the speed of a modern email rejection is stunning. The files seemed to be smoking as they came back.

I had never heard of them and they, until my email, had never heard of me.

A perfect match.

Imzadi is an independent publisher, one of many creating a place for authors. The amount of effort they expend for their authors is amazing for two people.  I am both amazed and grateful.

Anita’s covers are stunning and award winning. Some reviewers said they read the book because they liked the covers; some liked the covers more than the stories.

The Nagler mysteries – THE SWAMPS OF JERSEY; A GAME CALLED DEAD, THE WEIGHT OF LIVING, THE RED HAND, and DRAGOINY RISING – are the stories of an American city rising and falling, of a man, Nagler,  broken hearted, and self-doubting, of diverse characters who band together to overcome both societal and personal circumstances.

The books have won awards and received heartening good reviews. Thanks

They are a gritty as a dark street and as quiet as a graveyard.

They have given me the chance as a writer to grow and challenge myself to tell better stories each time out, and to  use what I learn about myself as elements in the books.

On to Book 6: NAGLER’S SECRET.

The Frank Nagler books can be found on Amazon, Barnes & Noble, Kobo, Walmart, audible.com and Apple books.

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Review: ‘American Nightingale,’ Stunning

The end of the American Civil War in 1865 was a time of hope and heartache. The nation as trying to heal after four years of combat had divided both the country and families.

That era comes to vivid life in Debra Scacciaferro’s AMERICN NIGHTINGALE.

The tumult of change bristles in her descriptions of New York City and the main setting, the Catskill Mountain House. Both scenes capture the conflict of the era, changing attitudes and the simmering conflict between the haves and have-nots.

Centering and exemplifying all this is Bella Gale Smith, her daughter Amanda, and Bella’s brother-in-law, Zachery Smith, who are drawn together by an opening disaster.

The story is plotted with care and filled with well-drawn characters, both heroic and villainous.

Bella and Zach carry burdens hatched during the war and their growth comes the center of the sprawling tale.

Shaped as a Victorian melodramatic romance, the story  is filled with modern details and sensibilities, the result of clever design and strong writing.

There are scenes filled with the dainty Victorian never-tell approach to life, which are mere cover for the underlying emergence of the modern American story.

Bella is a neophyte modern woman, as bold and dramatic as the changing times.

As perhaps a nod to the Victorian framework, the ending is not exactly a surprise, but fitting in this swift and detailed telling.

The story has both the lightness of a gentle, pleasant tale and the grittiness  of modern fiction.

Available on Amazon. Stunning (amazon.com)

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Nagler 6: Mystery by the numbers

In Book 5 of the Frank Nagler Mysteries, NAGLER’S SECRET, the mystery and the clues are more tangled than usual:

Here, Nagler and Captain Ramirez sort through tiny slips of cardboard containing messages that were found in an abandoned cabin.

“Detective Frank Nagler and Captain Maria Ramirez stared at the pile of strips of cardboard on the table.

“This is worse than pick up sticks we played as a kid,” she said as she examined one half-inch piece. “Does that say Bayonne?”  She handed it to Nagler.

He squinted at the paper, then shrugged.

“Either that or Day one.”

“What are these supposed to represent, Frank?”

“At first we thought they were information about the kids, like hometowns, so Bayonne would make sense. Maybe their names, parents’ names. The other day I took a random handful and wrote down what I found.” He reached into a  pocket and pulled out the list. “Look. Three of them said ‘tall.’  There were three others

with numbers – a 1, a 5 and 18. There was ‘Newark’  but there was also a ‘Newark 12.’”

“How long do you think the kids were stuffing these notes in the wall of that cabin?”

“Good question, Maria. How long has this been going on? Better question? How many such cabins were there?”  Nagler leaned back. “Sister Katherine’s old battered women’s network had at least eight safe houses, half out of state.”

Ramirez stood and stretched, the leaned over the table with her balled fists as supports.

“Why did the kids stuff these notes in the walls? Who did they expect to see them?”

“Other kids. How do inmates spread news?  Code words. These kids were inmates, Maria.”

“Okay, look for numbers. Here’s some,” She reached for three or four of the cardboard tabs. “Look, 579. 3, here’s and odd one, 2-20.”

Together they set aside fifteen tabs with numbers.

“What do numbers represent, Frank?”

“Order.”

“Order? Best you can do, Frank?” She smiled.

“Yeah. Street numbers, hours and minutes on a clock, age…”

“Height, weight,  directions, you know, three blocks up, four blocks over…”

“Measurements, four feet, eight feet, nine inches…”

They paused.

“This whole mess, this pile of hints and odd words is  a story,” Ramirez said. “Let’s start by pulling numbers and see what it tells us.”

They shuffled through the tabs and found twenty-five more.

“Okay,’ she said, “579 could be the country road.”

“31 is also a road. Do they intersect?”
          “So is 3, but that’s East Jersey.”

“Still, maybe a road heading for home.”

“Maybe.” Ramirez shook her head. “I think it’s more of a direction. On a compass face north is at 12, east at 3, south at 6 and west at 9.

“So 31-6  is take Route 31 south?”

“These are all mixed up, aren’t they,  from different tubes found  in the wall.”

Nagler nodded, “Yeah, we should have kept them separate. That was dumb.”

“Not necessarily. The kids new to the cabin wouldn’t have known the order.  So these notes might not have been date specific, just basic information, a road map of sorts.”

“You’re on to something.  Somehow the kids knew this information was in the wall, but they had to piece the meaning together.  Like, if you run east” – he held up a 3 – “on the …” Nagler searched the tabs on the table and pulled out several and held them up before placing them in order “…’pine,’ maybe a trail through a stand of pine trees…” He held up a 5… “Five miles. Look, ‘red’ maybe red… this one ‘sign’,  a stop sign? … or farm…” he held up a tab that said “tractor. A place with a red tractor, red barn… Then what…” Another tab, “cash.” … “Someone’s name? Maybe a bank, a direction to a bank…a marker on an escape trail…”

“Maybe not a bank, but ‘cache,’ misspelled, meaning deposit, a place to hide, steal, acquire, find…” She held up a tab, “‘food.’” She picked up another tab and another with three dollar signs.  “Find food or cash. We know that kid who escaped, Oscar, was helped  by a network.” She shrugged.  “Why not?”

Nagler walked around the table.

“Every one of these has a double meaning. How did the kids sort it out?”

“A keyword,” Maria said. “Codes often have a symbol or word that says, ‘after this word or mark, is the message…’ So maybe there was a known list of keywords that clued in the new kids to the messages.”

****

“Where are we going with this, Frank? Is this going to get us any closer to the  mess before us?”

“How do you tear down a wall?” He held up one hand. “Depends on whether you are inside the wall or outside. These are from the inside.”

Maria leaned over the table with the cardboard pieces. She stirred one of the small piles.

“Also depends on what the wall is made of. What’s this wall made of, Frank? Stone? Brick, Wood? Paper? Ideas?”

“Yup. Every wall has gaps, bad mortar, a seam that lets in water, a document that contains flawed logic, never tested, a belief become calcified, so stiff a tiny  rock cracks it.” He waved his hand over  the cardboard slips. “These are the tiny rock, Maria. We decode it and we are inside Sunshine Farms.”

For more Frank Nagler:

DRAGONY RISING, Book 5  in the series was named  a 2022 Notable 100 Indie Book by Shelf Unbound Book Awards, and presented First Place for Mysteries in the 2022 Royal Dragonfly Book Awards.

Dragony: Amazon.com: Dragony Rising: A Frank Nagler Novel – Book 5: 9781944653231: Daigle, Michael Stephen: Books

Dragony Rising: A Frank Nagler Novel – Book 5 by Michael Stephen Daigle, Paperback | Barnes & Noble® (barnesandnoble.com)

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New award for Nagler Mystery DRAGONY RISING

 I am pleased and honored to receive a First Place award in the  2022 Royal Dragonfly Indie book contest.

1st Place (ebook mystery): Dragony Rising by Michael Stephen Daigle.

Dragony Rising is the second Frank Nagler Mystery to be awarded First Place in the Royal Dragonfly Contest: “The Weight of Living” was awarded First Place for mysteries in the 2017 Royal Dragonfly Book Award contest.

 

This is also the second award this month for DRAGONY RISING:

Previously, Dragony Rising, book five  in the Frank Nagler Mystery Series was named a 2022 Notable 100 Indie Book by Shelf Unbound. Thanks, Shelf-Unbound!

https://shelfmediagroup.com/portfolio/december-january-2023/

What makes these contest wins rewarding is that each one draws thousands of entrees from around the world, and the books are judged by genre, so a mystery writer like myself is only competing against other mystery writers.

A latest review for DRAGONY RISING:

5.0 out of 5 stars Thriller!

Reviewed in the United States on December 20, 2022

This was such a thrill! A great detective story that made me not want to put the book down!

Dragony: Amazon.com: Dragony Rising: A Frank Nagler Novel – Book 5: 9781944653231: Daigle, Michael Stephen: Books

Dragony Rising: A Frank Nagler Novel – Book 5 by Michael Stephen Daigle, Paperback | Barnes & Noble® (barnesandnoble.com)

Read the other award-winning Frank Nagler Mysteries:

“A Game Called Dead” was named a Runner-Up in the Shelf Unbound 2016 Best Indie Book contest.

“The Weight of Living” was awarded First Place for mysteries in the 2017 Royal Dragonfly Book Award contest;

Named A Notable 100 Book, Shelf Unbound 2018 Indie Book Awards;

Named a Distinguished Favorite, 2018 Independent Press Awards.

Named a Distinguished Favorite in the 2018 Big NYC Book Contest.

Named a Finalist in the 2019 Book Excellence Awards.

Named A Gold Star Award winner in the 2020 Elite Choice Book Awards

Named a Book Award Winner in 2021 by Maincraft Media Fiction Book Awards

The Weight of Living (Frank Nagler Mystery Book 3) – Kindle edition by Daigle, Michael Stephen. Mystery, Thriller & Suspense Kindle eBooks @ Amazon.com.

“The Red Hand” was named a Distinguished Favorite in the 2019 Big NYC Book Contest

Named Second Place winner for mysteries in the 2019 Royal Dragonfly Book Awards

Named a Notable 100 Book in the 2019 Shelf Unbound Indie Book Awards

Named a Distinguished Favorite  in the 2020 Independent Press Awards

A Nominee in the 2020 TopShelf Book Awards

Named A Gold Star Award winner in the 2020 Elite Choice Book Awards

Kirkus Pro Page: https://www.kirkusreviews.com/r/my-pro/

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There’s more light today than yesterday

Solstice came.

There’s more light today than yesterday.

And tomorrow there will be more.

Grab it, smell it, wear it, taste it.

Share it.

We all rise.

Merry Christmas.

Happy Holidays.

And know that the  Porch Guys are watching.

Bless their fuzzy little heads.

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Royal Dragonfly: “DRAGONY RISING,” First Place

This just in… Congratulations to our 2022 Royal Dragonfly Book Awards Winners!

 

1st Place (ebook mystery): Dragony Rising by Michael Stephen Daigle

 

Amazed and honored to receive this award. Thanks, Royal Dragonfly!

This is the second award this month:

Previously, Dragony Rising, book five  in the Frank Nagler Mystery Series was been named a Notable 100 Indie Book by Shelf Unbound. Thanks, Shelf-Unbound!

What reviewers have said:

“This is the 5th book of the mystery series. In this book, detective Nagler who has a conscience and ethics from ancient times, follows clues to uncover corruption and crimes in NJ. The book is well-written and will keep you turning pages to try and find out how the latest unexpected twist develops.”

***

“A very well written and highly engaging book that sucked me in right away. The author masterfully crafted a fast paced and very realistic crime story. If you are into crime drama or mysteries, this book is a must! Well done…well done indeed!”

Kirkus Reviews: “Daigle’s series, in which the decaying Ironton is as rich a character as Frank, continues with this epic installment. The plot distills motifs that have hijacked American discourse for several years…  This crackling series installment provides a wide-angle shot of society and generations in conflict.”

Read the other award-winning Frank Nagler Mysteries:

“A Game Called Dead” was named a Runner-Up in the Shelf Unbound 2016 Best Indie Book contest.

“The Weight of Living” was awarded First Place for mysteries in the 2017 Royal Dragonfly Book Award contest;

Named A Notable 100 Book, Shelf Unbound 2018 Indie Book Awards;

Named a Distinguished Favorite, 2018 Independent Press Awards.

Named a Distinguished Favorite in the 2018 Big NYC Book Contest.

Named a Finalist in the 2019 Book Excellence Awards.

Named A Gold Star Award winner in the 2020 Elite Choice Book Awards

Named a Book Award Winner in 2021 by Maincraft Media Fiction Book Awards

“The Red Hand” was named a Distinguished Favorite in the 2019 Big NYC Book Contest

Named Second Place winner for mysteries in the 2019 Royal Dragonfly Book Awards

Named a Notable 100 Book in the 2019 Shelf Unbound Indie Book Awards

Named a Distinguished Favorite  in the 2020 Independent Press Awards

A Nominee in the 2020 TopShelf Book Awards

Named A Gold Star Award winner in the 2020 Elite Choice Book Awards

Kirkus Pro Page: https://www.kirkusreviews.com/r/my-pro/

Buy the books here:

Dragony: Amazon.com: Dragony Rising: A Frank Nagler Novel – Book 5: 9781944653231: Daigle, Michael Stephen: Books

Dragony Rising: A Frank Nagler Novel – Book 5 by Michael Stephen Daigle, Paperback | Barnes & Noble® (barnesandnoble.com)

 

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Dragony Rising: Notable 100 Indie by Shelf-Unbound

Dragony Rising, book five  in the Frank Nagler Mystery Series has been named a Notable 100 Indie Book by Shelf Unbound.

 

Follow this link to the entire list of winners.

https://shelfmediagroup.com/portfolio/december-january-2023/

NEW: All the Frank Nagler Mysteries are available at Book and Puppet Co. on the Square in Downtown Easton, Pa.

Dragony Rising is the most complex book in the series as Ironton, N.J. Detective Frank Nagler and his allies must discover who blew up a couple blocks of downtown. It is a story that shines a light on the city’s history and exposes actions that intend to bring the city to ruin.

What reviewers have said:

“This is the 5th book of the mystery series. In this book, detective Nagler who has a conscience and ethics from ancient times, follows clues to uncover corruption and crimes in NJ. The book is well-written and will keep you turning pages to try and find out how the latest unexpected twist develops.”

***

“A very well written and highly engaging book that sucked me in right away. The author masterfully crafted a fast paced and very realistic crime story. If you are into crime drama or mysteries, this book is a must! Well done…well done indeed!”

Kirkus Reviews: “Daigle’s series, in which the decaying Ironton is as rich a character as Frank, continues with this epic installment. The plot distills motifs that have hijacked American discourse for several years…  This crackling series installment provides a wide-angle shot of society and generations in conflict.”

Read the other award-winning Frank Nagler Mysteries:

“A Game Called Dead” was named a Runner-Up in the Shelf Unbound 2016 Best Indie Book contest.

“The Weight of Living” was awarded First Place for mysteries in the 2017 Royal Dragonfly Book Award contest;

Named A Notable 100 Book, Shelf Unbound 2018 Indie Book Awards;

Named a Distinguished Favorite, 2018 Independent Press Awards.

Named a Distinguished Favorite in the 2018 Big NYC Book Contest.

Named a Finalist in the 2019 Book Excellence Awards.

Named A Gold Star Award winner in the 2020 Elite Choice Book Awards

Named a Book Award Winner in 2021 by Maincraft Media Fiction Book Awards

“The Red Hand” was named a Distinguished Favorite in the 2019 Big NYC Book Contest

Named Second Place winner for mysteries in the 2019 Royal Dragonfly Book Awards

Named a Notable 100 Book in the 2019 Shelf Unbound Indie Book Awards

Named a Distinguished Favorite  in the 2020 Independent Press Awards

A Nominee in the 2020 TopShelf Book Awards

Named A Gold Star Award winner in the 2020 Elite Choice Book Awards

Kirkus Pro Page: https://www.kirkusreviews.com/r/my-pro/

Buy the books here:

Dragony: Amazon.com: Dragony Rising: A Frank Nagler Novel – Book 5: 9781944653231: Daigle, Michael Stephen: Books

Dragony Rising: A Frank Nagler Novel – Book 5 by Michael Stephen Daigle, Paperback | Barnes & Noble® (barnesandnoble.com)

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Nagler’s Secret: Who are the Missing?

While the reading world is getting to know DRAGONY RISING, the latest award-winning Frank Nagler Mystery, (Kirkus reviews: “This epic installment”) I am working on Nagler 6: NAGLER’S SECRET.

Kirkus link: https://wordpress.com/post/michaelstephendaigle.com/3648.

This story is intended to be more personal for my cop hero Frank Nagler, and deals with something from Frank’s past that only he knows, thus, the secret.

The overall story deals with the juvenile justice system and focuses on Anna, a young girl introduced in Nagler 3, THE WEIGHT OF LIVING. The framework for that side of the story springs from a case in Pennsylvania a few years ago in which a couple of judges were convicted of taking bribes to send convicts to certain for-profit jails.

This will be a story about loss, the ache and anger of loss, and with hope, healing.

As the writer my goal with the story will be able to produce light from darkness.

In this short scene reporter Jimmy Dawson receives a video that introduces him to the central mystery: Who are the Missing?

The scene:

“I know better,” Jimmy Dawson muttered, but clicked on the video file anyway.

A rectangle filled with a  shifting grey background  emerged while an indistinct multi-toned sound leaked from the speakers. The volume wavered, clearly modulated by controls. Dawson’s brow wrinkled in concentration as the sound shifted to a single moaning tone, fading, fading, no voices, but a hiss, then static. Then a word, or what Dawson thought was a word, garbled, gone; then another and another layered, scrambled, followed by another hiss, then silence.

Before he could form the thought that this thing seemed pointless  ten fingers punched through the gray background meaning it was not a background, but a screen. The fingers tore the screen down the middle and a face wrapped in layers of gauzy fabric took their place. The sound reemerged, words, parts of words, maybe names,  all the sounds muffled.

A layer of fabric was pulled away, then another. With each layer removed, the words became more distinct.

“They are names,”  Dawson said.

“Malcolm, Thomas, Janice, Virginia,  Malik…”

One after another now synced with a new layer of gauzy cloth being removed.

The names  rattled on, faster and faster – “Jasper, Adam, Mona, Christopher, Denice” —  as the cloth flew from the face, the combination of louder words and flashing cloth disorienting.

Layer by layer the cloth was removed until a pair of eyes filled the screen, eyes wide open, angry, then wrinkled in worry, filled with tears, blinking, closed; gone.

The screen blank for a moment.

Then words, deeply red: WE ARE THE MISSING.

A jabbing wail filled the room, pinning Dawson to the back of his chair.

The wail and the words faded together until the room was silent and the computer screen was blank.

Dawson copied the file to a flash drive.

I need a tech to find the source of that file, he thought, then  aloud, “Nagler needs to see that.”

Only when he leaned forward to cradle his head did he realize his hands were shaking.

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