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Oswald: The Prologue

Rethought the opening of this story.  Expanded the scene  to bring in most of the elements of the  overall story in one place.  Seemed like it would streamline the telling.  Oswald’s War, The Prolouge. The Diner was shrugged under the … Continue reading

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“Swamps of Jersey” Chapter 1, version 3

After weeks of rewrite, this is what emerged.  I think I’m done messing with it for now. Clean it up and show it to someone.   CHAPTER  1   The phone call grabbed Detective Frank Nagler from what sleep he … Continue reading

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